=head2 Module removals
-XXX Remove this section if inapplicable.
+XXX Remove this section if not applicable.
The following modules will be removed from the core distribution in a
future release, and will at that time need to be installed from CPAN.
=item *
-XXX
+XXX Remove this section if not applicable.
=back
L<XXX> has been upgraded from version A.xx to B.yy.
+If there was something important to note about this change, include that here.
+
=back
=head2 Removed Modules and Pragmata
=head1 Obituary
-XXX If any significant core contributor has died, we've added a short obituary
-here.
+XXX If any significant core contributor or member of the CPAN community has
+died, add a short obituary here.
=head1 Acknowledgements