"thread failed to start: " is better than "Died:".

[perl5.git] / pod / perlbot.pod

diff --git a/pod/perlbot.pod b/pod/perlbot.pod
index 0f7078f..bc4e4da 100644 (file)
--- a/pod/perlbot.pod
+++ b/pod/perlbot.pod
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ See L<CLASS CONTEXT AND THE OBJECT>.
 
 =item 7
 
-IO syntax is certainly less noisy, but it is also prone to ambiguities which
+IO syntax is certainly less noisy, but it is also prone to ambiguities that
 can cause difficult-to-find bugs.  Allow people to use the sure-thing OO
 syntax, even if you don't like it.
 
@@ -265,7 +265,7 @@ This example demonstrates an interface for the SDBM class.  This creates a
            $ref->FETCH(@_);
        }
        sub STORE {
-           my $self = shift; 
+           my $self = shift;
            if (defined $_[0]){
                my $ref = $self->{'dbm'};
                $ref->STORE(@_);
@@ -404,7 +404,7 @@ This problem can be solved by using the object to define the context of the
 method.  Let the method look in the object for a reference to the data.  The
 alternative is to force the method to go hunting for the data ("Is it in my
 class, or in a subclass?  Which subclass?"), and this can be inconvenient
-and will lead to hackery.  It is better to just let the object tell the
+and will lead to hackery.  It is better just to let the object tell the
 method where that data is located.
 
        package Bar;
@@ -420,7 +420,7 @@ method where that data is located.
 
        sub enter {
                my $self = shift;
-       
+
                # Don't try to guess if we should use %Bar::fizzle
                # or %Foo::fizzle.  The object already knows which
                # we should use, so just ask it.